老师：Nice to see you, boys and girls. I'm your new English teacher, Anna. At the beginning of our lesson, let's look at our learning aims. Number one, I can write a passage about holiday traveling with a mind map. Number two, I can make my passage logical and clear. No. 3, I can use different sentence structures to make my passage more attractive.
老师：Last lesson, we have talked about the topic holiday album. I know that many children like traveling. Do you like traveling? Yes, we had a lot of fun today. Let's try to write a passage about happy holidays. When we talked about the holidays you had before, we need to use the simple past tense, and we can write from these aspects, well, what, how, who, when? But details are very important. They make our passage interesting and attractive. What else can we write about? Please think it over.
老师：We can talk about the activities, the scenery, sports, the food, the special local products and so on. We can also share the weather. Was it sunny or raining there the way you got there? Did you get there by car or by plane? Don't forget to share your travel feeling to the others.
老师：Were you happy, excited or upset? Okay, we can write them all in the mind map, but how to draw your own mind map? I will give you an example. Last summer holiday, I went to Yunnan Dali. How was my holiday? Please enjoy the following video. Welcome to Wonderland. We've got it all. Potions and pastries that make you grow tall. Forests and cottages, castles and cards. I can talk. Welcome to Wonderland. Look where you are. At maddest of haters to chia shy your cat, magical cabins and lovely white rabbits. With. After watching this video, I think you have know a lot about my holiday. How do I draw a mind map of this holiday? Let me show you. Last summer holiday I went to Dali with my family. It was a long way. So I went there by plane. I stayed there for a week. The weather was sunny. What did I do? I traveled around our high lake. That was my favorite activity. I watched a wonderful show were traditional costumes and had fresh mushrooms and rice cakes. It was a wonderful holiday. It's not difficult, is it? So I have the tip for you. Mind maps can make your passage logical.
老师：Before writing, don't forget to draw a mind map. After drawing my mind map, I write a passage according to it. Here it is. Let me read for you. Last summer holiday, my family and I went to Dali by plane. It is a perfect place for fun. We stayed there for a week. 1St we traveled around the lake by car. We enjoyed the beautiful view on the way. After that, we went to Butterfly Spring Park. We saw a lot of butterflies dancing above the water. What a beautiful view near the water. My daughter and I took some photos in traditional costumes. At night, we watched a wo
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