老师：hello boys and girls nice to meet you welcome to my class im miss John from nanjing zhonyin middle school。 Today we are going to learn Unit 4, growing up task. Look at these pictures. Ma Yun and Alipay, Bill Gates and Microsoft, Steve Jobs and apple. These people and the products influence our life a lot.
老师：He is spot web. He was an MBA basketball superstar. He was hard working and never give up. Although he was very short, he proved that size and body type don't matter. He has influenced a lot of young people. He influenced our spirit. Great people influence us a lot.
老师：What about common people? Common people can also influence people a lot. Please read and answer 3 questions. Who has influenced the writer most? What is her father like? What does the writer think of him?
老师：Okay, let's check answers. 1. Her father has influenced her most. 2. He is kind and helpful. 3. He has a heart full of love. Now, please read the article again to find more details. Paragraph one, age in his fifties. We can use this kind of expression to talk about one's age. Working place, a local factory. Paragraphs 2,3. My father has always been kind and helpful. He gave our TV to a family who could not. A fourth one. He cares for the children who have lost their parents. Whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need. He has donated blood many times since 1990. He has donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.
老师：Paragraph four, he has a heart full of love. Usually, we use examples to support the main idea. For example, the writer's father is kind and helpful. It's his father's personality. He gives TV to poor family, cares for children, gives money to people in need. He donates blood and blood cells. He even decides to donate his body for medical research after his death. These are all the examples.
老师：These examples support the main idea. He is kind and helpful. In paragraph one, we know his father is in his fifties. He works in a local factory. You will not find anything unusual until you learn more. In paragraph one, we can know the general information about the person. It's the introduction part. In paragraphs 2,3, we know some examples. From these examples, we can learn about his father's personality, kind and helpful. It's the main body. In paragraph four, the writer tells us his father has a heart full of love. This is a writer's opinion. It's the conclusion of the article. So when we write about a person who influences us most, we need to write about a person's general information, including the name, age, looks, job, and so on. Then we write about the person's personality and use examples to support the main idea. At last, we write about t
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